During our time at Bournemouth we were advised by post-graduate students who gave us feedback on our documentary and for the others feedback on their promo's. We were really thankful for this feedback as it has helped us make our video a lot better and to the clients needs. Below is the feedback that they gave us and which points we have completed.
- Put a sound track within the interviews
- The introduction of each of the interviews should be tagged at the bottom left of each shot, to introduce the person(we have completed on the footage we have)
- The introduction needs to be established
- Good use of band footage and maybe use of more would be good
- A montage may be good to set up the feel of the venue(we have one completed for the end but needed one at the beginning)
- Simon Bates, use footage that links with what he is saying
- Maybe some transition footage in between the interviews to breakup the structure
- Good use of titles to break up the structure
- Shots of the interview needed more to be used more to breakup the footage of editing
- Shots of screen edit - too much
- First five mins need to be broken up so it make it less boring
- Setting up a feel of what we to get from the film, basic introduction
- Faster cuts to give more structure and a smoothly flow to the documentary(we have almost completed, being re-edited while we bring in new footage)
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