After we completed the rough cut version of our documentary, we asked others to give us feedback on what we had produced. We started by getting feedback from the class and then we managed to get feedback from Simon who has commissioned us. Below is the feedback that he gave us based on the rough cut that he saw.
"Visuals looks clear and mature.
Audio sounds good.
Interviews with the students, Junction staff, lecturers interviews. More, e.g Nick would be great, Sandra at Long Road, Jonathan at Bournemouth for interviews.
Demonstrations of students working alongside Junction and Bournemouth staff, Some good footage but more of the Samba and CRaM conference would be great.
Interviews with students who are going to Bournemouth and how Long Road has developed the link. Needs more of this
Information for other consortia on how to schools and FE colleges should engage with employers.
More on: students saying how important this is to the success of diplomas, at the end of the day this is why students do diplomas!
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